I agree with the others that the outfit looks great in theory, but it will all come down to how it works on YOUR body. Everyone has different torso and rise lengths, and proportions can really make or break an outfit.
This is one reason why capsule wardrobes sound great in theory but can be difficult to put together when it comes down to it. One top might work proportionally well with one type of bottom but not with another, or one top might tuck better in a midrise than in a high rise. The only answer is to get your hands dirty and try stuff on!