Do you think this outfit works as MOTG? Or is it boring, bad proportions, needs improving / other styling?

I'm hoping the loafers works, but are not sure, so very happy for honest input. If they don't fit, is it because they are dated, bad proportions, other reason?

All suggestions and comments are welcome!

- Zara blazer
- tee with print
- grey linen trousers
- black loafers with chunky heel
- bracelts

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