I think the first look is really terrific -- soft colors, with a really modern silhouette and great proportions. As for the green shirt --- I suspect it is the pairing of jewel tone with black trousers that leaves you a tad unsatisfied. As someone who used to do this sort of pairing all the time, I suspect that switching to denim with a semi tuck, or with grey, or white trousers, will probably make your happier. It's also likely that the look doesn't photograph as well as it looks IRL -- I find black pants appear a bit flat in pics.