Glory, good for you for posting a photo! I know it can be tough to do. But it is SOOOOO helpful to us!
How does the top feel? As others have said, I personally find that style of top hard to wear. But it's not me who is wearing it!
I like the pattern and colours and I actually like the neckline for you, too. But I do agree with Astrid that a slightly more defined shoulder might be nice in terms of ultimate figure flattery. However, it's possible that it would look a little different if you weren't having to hold the camera and if it looks good to you straight on, and fills a need, then go for it.